It’s only days away until the release of Heartbreak’s Reward. RELEASED and available.
I thought I’d come in with a teaser. You won’t find this in the book though. This is a deleted scene. My own heart bleeds for this heartbroken cowboy. If you’ve read Cowboy Boss, you know the details that led up to this. Otherwise, it’s self-explanatory. This book can be read on its own.
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Jase Carlson rolled in with the empty horse trailer at 2:30 a.m., unhooked it, and took a stroll through the barn to check on the horses, maybe hand out a cookie or two. Before exiting, he patted his horse then gave him a cookie. He dragged himself into the house, tired, worn out, driving longer than he should have. Dropping into a chair at the table in the kitchen, he removed his dusty boots. He grabbed a beer, and set it on the table in the living room to regroup for a few minutes before going to bed.
He went down the hall to kiss his kids goodnight. Turning the knob, he slowly opened the door to Joey’s bedroom. “What the hell?” He flipped the light on then ran down the hall to Jaelle’s room. Everything was gone. “She took my kids!” He burst through his bedroom door. Rebecca’s closet was empty. He pulled open dresser drawers. Nothing.
Venturing through the rest of the house, the only things gone were the kid’s toy boxes and their bedroom furnishings, some items from the bathroom, food from the cupboards. He opened the door to the back—her car sat there. “She didn’t take her damn car?” He stumbled back against the wall. What hell did they go through when she took them? What did she tell them?
Jase grabbed hold of his head with both hands. “Dammit!” He slammed his palms against the hallway wall to hold up his quivering body, lowering his head and pushing in and out, torn to bits in an instant. Sonofabitch! No… He backed into the opposite wall and dropped to the floor, his face going into his hands. My angel’s gone. My boy…
After he quit shaking, he dialed his brother’s phone. “My kids are gone. She took them, Tristan.” And he hung up.
Text Copyright 2014 Mary J. Dressel
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8 thoughts on “Heartbreak’s Reward Deleted Scene Teaser”
sharmishtha basu
all the best!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I appreciate your visit.
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siobhandaiko
A powerful scene. Glad you reworked it into your new chapter. 🙂
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thanks, Siobhan. I only worked bits of this chapter into my final scene. I hated cutting this scene. I’m glad you came by and left a comment.
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teagan geneviene
Mary that is an incredible emotional scene… I’m sure there must be a good reason why you removed it… But i’m glad you didn’t completely delete it from existence. Dang… that’s a good scene. Huge hugs!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you. I deleted the first 1.5 chapters, but I incorporated some of it into the new Chapter 1. I have nearly all the deleted scenes from my book. I’m glad you liked the post.
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mihrank
Great combination of you tube with your post. it shows the story deeper
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you very much. I appreciate that you visited.
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