Welcome to another Book Hooks snippet.
Canyon Junction: Hearts in Love series #2
A Double Dutch Ranch Series Spin off Novel.
Finding Kimber.
No, no. “NO. I love you all!” she shouted out to a closed window. “I’ll miss you…” Tressa scooted over and held her hand up to the dark window. She sobbed in painful gulps. What she saw out the window was like watching a movie play out before her eyes. A movie with a sad, sad ending.
From here, they’d leave Oregon and go to Boise, Idaho to have her mole removed, change her hair color, and wait for the credentials with her new name of Kimber Kay Sinclair. Then, it’d be onward to Arizona. “It’s time to go,” Melinda said to the driver.
“No, not yet,” cried Tressa.
He drove away. She couldn’t remove her eyes from what they left behind. Firetrucks passed them by. Jerry would meet them later. Never in her life had she known he had connections to do such a feat. But being a retiree from law enforcement, he pulled the right strings to set up her death—to protect her and her family—all under the table and for a large fee to some of the connections he’d made throughout his career.
To the world, Tressa Garnett had died in a revenge killing. Sam would have no reason to search for her now. Jerry had vowed to take care of her from the day he had become her godfather. He had promised to protect her. To keep her safe. And he had. She, on the other hand, would never see her family again and would remain broken for the rest of her life.
Cattleman Zachary (Zach) Bryson arrives in Arizona with hopes of leaving the ghosts from his past behind. Hired by a stranger to run a ranch, he meets the owner—a secretive woman with no ranching experience. He’s seen her before, but she wasn’t a redhead with green eyes. In their first encounter, she swept him off his feet without their exchanging a word. Why did she change her appearance? What secrets lay behind those heart-stopping eyes? Seeing this job as a challenge, he sticks around to tackle this hottie head-on.
After her life is threatened, Kimber Sinclair is forced to flee her lush Oregon county for a small town in Arizona with sand, saguaros, and dusty cowboys. She settles in to live a lie—to discover the person behind her new identity while she mourns the death of Tressa Garnett—her given name at birth. However, keeping a distance from her ruggedly handsome, broad-shouldered, wise-cracking ranch foreman, isn’t easy. She struggles daily to hide her secret from Zach who demands answers. By telling him the truth, his life could also be in danger.
If trouble finds her, will she choose fight or flight? Can Zach set aside his own issues, or will his nightmares prevent him from doing what he was unknowingly hired to do?
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16 thoughts on “#MFRWhooks Broken”
tenajean
Interesting circumstance she finds herself in. Will she stay and fight or fly. Interesting hook. Thanks for sharing. I love the premise. Good Luck!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you, Tena.
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Teagan R. Geneviene
Terrific hook, Mary. I can relate to Tressa/Kimber. Hugs on the wing.
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thanks, Teagan.
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Ed Hoornaert
By describing all the places they’ll go, you do a good job of showing her sense of isolation.
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you, Ed.
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Cathy Brockman
This sounds so good!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thanks, Cathy. This book almost never saw the light of day and didn’t start out as a western romance. I’m happy the way the revision turned out and that it did get published.
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Jacquie Biggar
Ooh, poor Tressa!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Strength in numbers. I loved writing their story.
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janwal
Rather startling bit here.
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Yes, I agree, Jan. I can’t imagine doing what Tressa/ Kimber had to do. Well, I guess I did imagine, and feel, it while writing.
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D. Wallace Peach
Sounds like there’s going to be some steam with this one, Mary. As well as some danger?? Great snippet. 🙂
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Zach is hard to resist, Diana. ❤ Danger, betrayal, etc., etc. 🙂
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henhousepublishing
Ah, heartbreak!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Yes, Holly, as well as the author’s heart. Thanks for visiting.
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