Book Hooks Wednesday.
Hi, I hope you don’t mind another snippet from Whispers of Forever, but I’m continuing with a post taking place a few days later from last week’s post. Jake had invited Paige to dinner before she left them. Before she and her boyfriend flew across the country to their new home. It had been a pleasant evening between, Jake, their son Trace, and Paige. Jake faced his true feelings about losing her.
His heart beat fast and strong. It took all the strength he had to stand there straight-faced, feigning calm as if he didn’t care. He cared. Even if he had wanted to hate her, he couldn’t, but it slowly brewed in his body and mind, especially after seeing the pain in his boy’s eyes—pain she had caused. He wanted to tell her she didn’t have to do this, but it would be worthless. She loved the other guy enough to have his baby. To give everything up for him. Yep, hate began to boil now. “Take care of yourself, Paige. I’ll take good care of our boy.”
“I know you will, sweetie,” she said softly with a tenderness in her eyes he hadn’t seen in ages. Paige released Trace and hugged Jake, whispering, “A part of me will always…well, you know.”
“But not enough.” Jake took a deep breath and left her embrace. “Come here, bud.” He lifted his son who was more than half of Jake’s height, and carried him outside to see her off. Trace didn’t object, now crying on his shoulder as Paige drove away.
“Daddy?”
“What, son?” he gulped out as the taillights faded.
“Will Mom come back?”
Trace’s heart beat as hard and fast as his did. He hugged him tighter, a desert-sand dryness blocking a normal swallow. “She said she would.” Jake gulped again. “Let’s take a walk through the barn.” He started to put T.J. down, but he tightened his hold around his dad’s neck.
“No.” He cried and Jake stood right there holding him and he cried internally.
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After feeding and watering their horses, they came in from the barn. Trace got a bath and then Jake took a shower while his boy ate ice cream in front of the TV. He stood at the mirror in the small bathroom downstairs about to put shaving cream on his face.
A shattering scream ripped from Trace’s throat, “Daddy! Daddy? Dad…”
What the hell? Jake dropped his razor and rushed into the living room. “What’s the matter? Why are you watching the news, bud?” He glanced at the screen. Breaking News. “What happened?”
Trace stood in front of the TV pointing. He didn’t say anything more, but his chin dimpled and quivered.
Jake’s feet had been knocked out from under him. He dropped to the sofa. Blood drained from his face, and it all dropped to his feet. His head spun. He was unable to believe what he saw. Oh, my God. “Come here, T.J.” He reached out to bring him close, to hold him, to embrace him.
Next week, Lord willing, you’ll meet Beth. Then we’ll be finished with Whispers of Forever for a while. <grin> Find information about the book and the series on the series page.
Visit participating authors HERE. Book Hooks is a weekly meme hosted by Marketing for Romance Writers as part of the MFRW Authors Blog. It’s a chance each week to hook readers on your current WIP or any previously published book.
I appreciate your visit. Stay well.
I’ve been under the weather for the 4th day now. Ugh. Super scary!
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D. Wallace Peach
Yes. That was a great hook!!!!!! Yeesh. Lol
Now I want to know what happened.
Good one, Mary, torturing your blog followers. 🙂 ❤
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Hehe. Sorry about that, Diana. I have to get to the real story and give my hero the love he deserves. Thanks for reading. 😉
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Ed Hoornaert
What did he see on the television — news of a plane crash? Something else?
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Hmm. Hurt my hero and see what happens. Thanks for reading, Ed.
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Cathy Brockman
wow this was great sad, then captivating.
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thanks, Cathy. It was sad writing it and rereading for me too.
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janwal
Interesting. Hope you feel better soon
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you, Janet. I’m beginning to five days later.
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tenajean
Wow, emotional and what has happened. Good job. Thanks for sharing!
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Thank you, Tena. Glad you liked it.
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Babs Mountjoy
One heck of a place to end the excerpt!!!! 🙂
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Mary J. McCoy-Dressel
Oh, sorry, Babs. 😉 hehe. Thanks for visiting. ❤
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